Pages

Monday, April 20, 2020

What's that smell

Rise and shine! The sun is coming up, I can feel the ground warming up and can see the giant trees above me. The sunlight is shining through the trees, The air feels warm today so summer must be on its way, I can hear chirping birds everywhere and rustling leaves. I smelt a delicious smell that was far away, so I decided to follow the smell, I slithered along the dirty ground. After half an hour I met up with my friend, Sophia and she also smelt the smell and she was heading there as well, so we both set off on a journey to find the food we smelt. “What have you been doing?,” I said to Sophia “slithering around hiding from birds,” said Sophia, “What have you been up to?” “the same as you,” I said. I thought to myself, the smell is getting even closer! “let’s take the next left” I said “yes” Sophia said. The smell was getting closer and closer, but then a bird came swooping down at us. We saw a hole in a tree so we wriggled in it, “I think the bird has gone” I said. A while later we both shouted, “ We are finally here!” We had found a huge patch of dandelions by the edge of the forest. Yum, this is our favorite food!! Later that day we were so tired that we decided to sleep right where we are. We curled up into our shells and fell asleep. We were two very tired snails.





Hi this is one of the home learning tasks, We did a show not tell and I wrote about snail and how it met with it's friend on a journey. 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Ella
    You set the scene so well with your descriptive language so I was able to imagine being there. Wonderful use of speech marks too, ka pai!

    ReplyDelete

To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post