Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, April 22, 2020
Letter
Hi, this is one of the home learning tasks we watched a video of a robot and we had to write a letter to his family that did not live on earth, I write about how much he liked it here and he really wanted to stay but his family didn't live here so he has a big decision to make!!
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora Ella
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your letter Ella. It is a well thought out piece of writing giving a feel for life on Earth from Robbie the Robot's perspective. Excellent use of descriptive language. Remember to proof read your work for punctuation. Ka pai!