Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 24, 2020
ANZAC
Hi, this is an ANZAC task, I wrote about my great grandfather and how he survived in the world war 2 and there are pictures of what is happening.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Oh wow! This is a lovely piece of family history Ella. How wonderful you have the same name as your grandmother! Just remember your reflection and question for the reader next time. Well done and thank you for sharing this with us!
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