Tuesday, April 2, 2019
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Hi Ella,
ReplyDeleteI am Tayla Keech from Marshland School, I really liked your animation as it was very creative. My favorite part was when you made the sandwich it made me laugh! Next time you could maybe work on your spelling and do more slides when your people are talking, but overall its really good.
-Tayla :)
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DeleteHello Ella its Sophia,
ReplyDeleteI am just here to say well done for completing your animation rocket ship. I really liked how you were creative and made your very own sandwich, it was really clever. What I saw was sometimes you were off and then on the moon witch confused me but was really cool. Keep up the good work because your doing a great job!
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DeleteHi Ella
ReplyDeleteI really liked the part when you made the sandwich! Maybe you could work on your spelling next time. You taught me that food does not float even when you do. Zara
Hi Ella, I am Ella Davidson. I really like your animation because it is very creative. I enjoyed the part when the rocket ship went up and smoke came out just like a normal rocket ship would do. Maybe next time you could make the slide longer so it would be more interesting. This was a very interesting animation.
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DeleteHi Ella,Its Leah. I like the way you added in some small details which made it more interesting,Next time you could add more slides and talk about the setting.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Ella. I really liked the way you made the person go to space. Did you think about putting a bubble thing around their head? Next time you could check your spelling. Good job!
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