Thursday, April 2, 2020
Teeth
Hi, this is another one of my home learning tasks, it is about two people and one of them loses there false teeth overboard because the other person stood up when his teeth were on the side of the boat and then he throws the other person teeth overboard.
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Hi Ella, what a well written piece of writing. I like the way you have used speech marks throughout your writing. I want you to try and use paragraphs when you are writing as it will organise it even more! Keep up the great work!
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