Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 30, 2020
The diving giraffes
Hi, this is one of our tasks that we are doing for home learning. I did this one because I thought it was super cool because there were giraffes diving of diving blocks. What would you feel like if you were diving off the blocks?
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This is a great piece of writing Ella, I like how you have given a clear introduction too! I would be terrible diving off a block because I can only do belly flops- ouch!
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