Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, January 13, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia Ora Ella,
ReplyDeleteWhat a gorgeous travel poster! Like how you have incorporated some of the great scenery in Rarotonga as well as some bold colours to make it stand out. It looks incredible.
I noticed you mentioned Rarotonga has great snorkeling. Have you ever been snorkeling before? Do you want to go again? What kind of things do you think you’d see under the sea?
Perhaps you could make the text have a black outline to help it stand out more again the bright background. This would make it easier to read for your readers. You could also increase the size of it.
Happy blogging!
Ngā mihi maioha,
Shannon (SLJ)