Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, May 22, 2019
What needs to keep private and somethings that you can post
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Ella L. I like the way that you layed out your work really nicely so we can see it properly. Next time can you please put the photos a bit smaller so I can see the writing because I struggled to read it, but otherwise super good! Thanks, Libby.
ReplyDeleteIt was hard to drag the writing over.
Deletehi ella.L i love this drawing it is so cool that i am going to die
ReplyDeleteHi Ella, I like your cyber safety work, I'm pleased to hear you know to not put your full name, my name or our address on the internet!
ReplyDeleteLots of love , Mum xx